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Back in the 1970s, my grandparents bought 2 lots on Mile Post 7 in Kill Devil Hills, NC 🌾 Back when the Outer Banks was mostly sand dunes and beach grass.

In 1978, they built a little beach cottage (as my Grandma would say) on one of those lots.

It became our family’s anchor.

Summers with cousins, trips with friends, and later visits with my own little family 🫶

But in June 2022, everything changed.

My Grandma Kitty, the matriarch of our family and the woman who made me feel safe, seen, and deeply loved, went to be with Jesus.

The house went into a trust & my husband & I couldn’t afford to buy it.

Especially with all the repairs it needed.

On the drive home, I asked my dad, “If I could save enough for the empty lot next door could we buy it?”

He said yes as long as no one else in the family wanted it, but none of us really believed it.

Still, I couldn’t bear to let go of this beach. This house. This legacy.

So I grieved the only way I knew how: I buried myself in work.

Never in a million years did I expect what happened next.

A few months later, my husband (who tracks our finances because money is not my thing) noticed something strange: my income wasn’t matching my hours and hours and hours of work.

And as we discussed it on the couch I suddenly remembered a old VA of mine had set up a separate Stripe account with a separate email address for one of my offers…

After searching Gmail and resetting passwords I logged in & there it was…

The exact amount we needed for the down payment.

So in 2024…

We bought the lot.
We found a builder.
And now, @kittyscottageobx is here 🫶

We’ve been here a week & we’ll spend most of June in this space that means everything to me.

The Outer Banks has always felt like home.

And now…we have one of our own.

A place to rest, host, & slow down.

A piece of my grandparents’ legacy.

And the beginning of a new one.

And it’s all because I took a chance and started a little social media business 10 years ago today. 

So let this be your sign to bet on yourself. Do something that lights you up. Share your passion. And show up with a servant heart.

I’m cheering you on so hard, friend 🫶
INSTAGRAM@shannonmckinstrie

Back in the 1970s, my grandparents bought 2 lots on Mile Post 7 in Kill Devil Hills, NC 🌾 Back when the Outer Banks was mostly sand dunes and beach grass. In 1978, they built a little beach cottage (as my Grandma would say) on one of those lots. It became our family’s anchor. Summers with cousins, trips with friends, and later visits with my own little family 🫶 But in June 2022, everything changed. My Grandma Kitty, the matriarch of our family and the woman who made me feel safe, seen, and deeply loved, went to be with Jesus. The house went into a trust & my husband & I couldn’t afford to buy it. Especially with all the repairs it needed. On the drive home, I asked my dad, “If I could save enough for the empty lot next door could we buy it?” He said yes as long as no one else in the family wanted it, but none of us really believed it. Still, I couldn’t bear to let go of this beach. This house. This legacy. So I grieved the only way I knew how: I buried myself in work. Never in a million years did I expect what happened next. A few months later, my husband (who tracks our finances because money is not my thing) noticed something strange: my income wasn’t matching my hours and hours and hours of work. And as we discussed it on the couch I suddenly remembered a old VA of mine had set up a separate Stripe account with a separate email address for one of my offers… After searching Gmail and resetting passwords I logged in & there it was… The exact amount we needed for the down payment. So in 2024… We bought the lot. We found a builder. And now, @kittyscottageobx is here 🫶 We’ve been here a week & we’ll spend most of June in this space that means everything to me. The Outer Banks has always felt like home. And now…we have one of our own. A place to rest, host, & slow down. A piece of my grandparents’ legacy. And the beginning of a new one. And it’s all because I took a chance and started a little social media business 10 years ago today. So let this be your sign to bet on yourself. Do something that lights you up. Share your passion. And show up with a servant heart. I’m cheering you on so hard, friend 🫶

  • Text overlay drives the narrative.
  • Visuals provide proof of the story.
  • Fast pacing keeps retention high.
transformationcasual vlogmatch to musicMusic-Driven
Hook
8/10
Viral
7/10
Views95.7K
Likes2.8K
Analysis

Execution Elements

Visual Style

casual vlog

natural

Audio Design

emotional

none

The Hook

transformation

Relatable struggle to success arc

Setting

outdoor deck, interior

sunglasses, smartphone

Structure Analysis

3 SHOTS
01

Hook

Establishes the relatable struggle of starting a business for rent money.

00:00 - 00:051 SHOT
Shot 1 frame 1
100:00
medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Establishes personal connection and authenticity.

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Woman walks on a wooden deck, smiling at the camera.

Audio

music only

02

Reveal

Shows the visual proof of the success and the dream lifestyle achieved.

00:05 - 00:082 SHOTS
Shot 2 frame 1
200:05
wide shoteye-levelstatic

Provides visual proof of the success mentioned in text.

Camera

static

Action

Interior shot of a modern kitchen.

Audio

music only

hard-cut
Shot 3 frame 1
300:06
wide shoteye-levelstatic

Emotional payoff showing the dream lifestyle.

Camera

static

Action

Child running on the beach at dusk.

Audio

music only

Script

Beat-by-beat script with lyric and action cues

0 words
3 shots
2 beats
EN

Screenplay

1 PAGE
Screenplay
Back in the 1970s, my grandparents bought 2 lots on Mile Post 7 in Kill Devil Hills, NC 🌾 Back when the Outer Banks was mostly sand dunes and beach grass. In 1978, they built a little beach cottage (as my Grandma would say) on one of those lots. It became our family’s anchor. Summers with cousins, trips with friends, and later visits with my own little family 🫶 But in June 2022, everything changed. My Grandma Kitty, the matriarch of our family and the woman who made me feel safe, seen, and deeply loved, went to be with Jesus. The house went into a trust & my husband & I couldn’t afford to buy it. Especially with all the repairs it needed. On the drive home, I asked my dad, “If I could save enough for the empty lot next door could we buy it?” He said yes as long as no one else in the family wanted it, but none of us really believed it. Still, I couldn’t bear to let go of this beach. This house. This legacy. So I grieved the only way I knew how: I buried myself in work. Never in a million years did I expect what happened next. A few months later, my husband (who tracks our finances because money is not my thing) noticed something strange: my income wasn’t matching my hours and hours and hours of work. And as we discussed it on the couch I suddenly remembered a old VA of mine had set up a separate Stripe account with a separate email address for one of my offers… After searching Gmail and resetting passwords I logged in & there it was… The exact amount we needed for the down payment. So in 2024… We bought the lot. We found a builder. And now, @kittyscottageobx is here 🫶 We’ve been here a week & we’ll spend most of June in this space that means everything to me. The Outer Banks has always felt like home. And now…we have one of our own. A place to rest, host, & slow down. A piece of my grandparents’ legacy. And the beginning of a new one. And it’s all because I took a chance and started a little social media business 10 years ago today. So let this be your sign to bet on yourself. Do something that lights you up. Share your passion. And show up with a servant heart. I’m cheering you on so hard, friend 🫶
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by shannonmckinstrie
INT./EXT. — HOOK
Establishes the relatable struggle of starting a business for rent money.
Woman walks on a wooden deck, smiling at the camera.
[medium shot, handheld]
[00:00]
ON-SCREEN TEXT
(CAPTION)
I thought I was starting a business so I could stay home with our daughter and help pay rent. Turns out, it led to a 7-figure income, 400K followers across social, and a beach house in the Outer Banks...my favorite place on earth.
[on-screen text]
[00:00]
LYRICS
(TRACK)
I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you
Interior shot of a modern kitchen.
Child running on the beach at dusk.
— THE END —
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Transcript

Minimal Speech
0 words
2 segments
EN

I thought I was starting a business so I could stay home with our daughter and help pay rent. Turns out, it led to a 7-figure income, 400K followers across social, and a beach house in the Outer Banks...my favorite place on earth.

I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you, I need you

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Shannon McKinstrie | Social Media Strategist & Marketer

Shannon McKinstrie | Social Media Strategist & Marketer

@shannonmckinstrie on instagram • 350375 followers

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