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  • Authentic, raw vlog style builds trust with the audience.
  • The 'early arrival' premise provides a unique angle on a common event.
  • Simple, direct interviews feel personal and relatable.
visual surprisecasual vlogslow deliberateTalking Head
Hook
4/10
Viral
2/10
Views137
Likes13
Analysis

Execution Elements

Visual Style

casual vlog

natural

Audio Design

none

none

The Hook

visual surprise

Immediate visual context of a major stadium

Setting

baseball stadium

handheld phone

Structure Analysis

7 SHOTS
01

Hook

Establishes the location and the 'early bird' premise.

00:00 - 00:011 SHOT
Shot 1 frame 1
100:00
wide shoteye-levelstatic

Establish location

Camera

static

Action

View of the empty baseball stadium field from the concourse.

Audio

ambient stadium noise

02

Build

The creator introduces the context of the video to the audience.

00:01 - 00:101 SHOT
Shot 2 frame 1
200:01
medium close-upeye-levelhandheld

Introduce the premise

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Man talking directly to camera, explaining they are at the game early.

Audio

dialogue clear

03

Reveal

Introduces the secondary character and the stadium view.

00:10 - 00:312 SHOTS
Shot 3 frame 1
300:10
medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Introduce secondary character

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Wife waves at the camera.

Audio

dialogue continues

hard-cut
Shot 4 frame 1
400:14
wide shoteye-levelpan

Show the environment

Camera

pan right to left

Action

Camera pans across the stadium field.

Audio

ambient noise

04

Solution

The interview segment provides the 'why' behind the video.

00:31 - 00:561 SHOT
Shot 5 frame 1
500:31
medium close-upeye-levelhandheld

Content delivery

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Wife talking to the camera about the new jersey.

Audio

dialogue clear

05

Proof

Visual confirmation of the specific jersey mentioned.

00:56 - 01:001 SHOT
Shot 6 frame 1
600:56
medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Visual reveal

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Camera focuses on the back of the wife's jersey.

Audio

dialogue continues

06

CTA

Closing the vlog by showing the atmosphere and encouraging the viewer.

01:00 - 01:341 SHOT
Shot 7 frame 1
701:00
medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Outro

Camera

tracking forward

Action

Walking through the concourse, showing the crowd and atmosphere.

Audio

ambient noise

Script

Full screenplay with dialogue and action

235 words
2 speakers
7 shots
6 beats
EN

Screenplay

5 PAGES
Screenplay
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Page
1 / 5
by jimmcandrewheadshots
Speakers: Host, Wife
INT./EXT. — HOOK
Establishes the location and the 'early bird' premise.
View of the empty baseball stadium field from the concourse.
INT./EXT. — BUILD
The creator introduces the context of the video to the audience.
Man talking directly to camera, explaining they are at the game early.
[medium close-up, handheld]
[00:01]
HOST
Okay, I'm live. It is our first Phillies game of the year.
[00:03]
It's our first one.
[00:05]
And as always, we got here very early so we can walk around.
[00:09]
So my lovely wife...
INT./EXT. — REVEAL
Introduces the secondary character and the stadium view.
Wife waves at the camera.
[medium shot, handheld]
[00:10]
HOST
Here she is.
6 Beats · 7 ShotsSuperdirector.appEN
Screenplay
Untitled
Page
2 / 5
[00:11]
HOST
What do we have to do?
[00:12]
WIFE
We have to walk around.
[00:13]
HOST
And we have to keep, we have to always walk in.
Camera pans across the stadium field.
[wide shot, pan]
[00:15]
HOST
(V.O.)
Almost everyone can stand here and look at the field from here.
[00:19]
(V.O.)
Oh, look at that. Some sort of practice.
[00:22]
(V.O.)
Look at that now. Look at this.
[00:23]
(V.O.)
Awesome.
[00:24]
(V.O.)
There you go. That's excellent.
[00:28]
(V.O.)
Very cool.
[00:30]
(V.O.)
So I think...
6 Beats · 7 ShotsSuperdirector.appEN
Screenplay
Untitled
Page
3 / 5
INT./EXT. — SOLUTION
The interview segment provides the 'why' behind the video.
Wife talking to the camera about the new jersey.
[medium close-up, handheld]
[00:31]
HOST
So, what's going to happen tonight?
[00:33]
WIFE
Why is tonight special?
[00:35]
Oh, because of the new pitcher.
[00:37]
HOST
What's his name?
[00:38]
WIFE
Painter.
[00:41]
HOST
Painter.
[00:42]
WIFE
And, uh, Painter.
[00:45]
HOST
Painter.
[00:47]
Painter. There we go.
[00:48]
And is he going to win tonight?
[00:50]
WIFE
Of course.
[00:51]
HOST
Yes, of course.
6 Beats · 7 ShotsSuperdirector.appEN
Screenplay
Untitled
Page
4 / 5
[00:52]
HOST
And she's sporting her new...
[00:53]
...Phanatic jersey that she...
INT./EXT. — PROOF
Visual confirmation of the specific jersey mentioned.
Camera focuses on the back of the wife's jersey.
[medium shot, handheld]
[00:56]
HOST
The Phanatic jersey that she...
INT./EXT. — CTA
Closing the vlog by showing the atmosphere and encouraging the viewer.
Walking through the concourse, showing the crowd and atmosphere.
[medium shot, handheld]
[01:00]
HOST
(V.O.)
All right, we're back.
[01:01]
(V.O.)
It is through the concourse.
[01:04]
(V.O.)
We're walking all the way around, get some steps in.
[01:06]
(V.O.)
We got a good hour and 30 minutes before the game starts.
6 Beats · 7 ShotsSuperdirector.appEN
Screenplay
Untitled
Page
5 / 5
[01:08]
HOST
(V.O.)
So you got to get here early, experience the whole thing.
[01:12]
(V.O.)
Maybe have a cheesesteak.
[01:14]
(V.O.)
Or a burger or something.
[01:16]
(V.O.)
Maybe it's buy one get one free dog night.
[01:18]
(V.O.)
So we won't be doing that.
[01:20]
(V.O.)
But anyway, there you go.
[01:23]
(V.O.)
First game of the year, go Phillies.
[01:25]
Go Phillies.
— THE END —
6 Beats · 7 ShotsSuperdirector.appEN

Transcript

Dialogue
235 words
2 speakers
42 segments
EN
HostWife
Host

Okay, I'm live. It is our first Phillies game of the year.

Host

It's our first one.

Host

And as always, we got here very early so we can walk around.

Host

So my lovely wife...

Host

Here she is.

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Jim McAndrew | Headshot Photographer

Jim McAndrew | Headshot Photographer

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