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Untitled Scene

Authentic, raw vlog style builds trust with the audience.
The 'early arrival' premise provides a unique angle on a common event.
Simple, direct interviews feel personal and relatable.

visual surprisecasual vlogslow deliberateTalking Head

Hook

4/10

Viral

2/10

Likes13

Analysis

Execution Elements

Visual Style

casual vlog

natural

Audio Design

none

The Hook

visual surprise

Immediate visual context of a major stadium

Setting

baseball stadium

handheld phone

Structure Analysis

7 SHOTS

Hook

Establishes the location and the 'early bird' premise.

00:00 - 00:011 SHOT

100:00

wide shoteye-levelstatic

Establish location

Camera

static

Action

View of the empty baseball stadium field from the concourse.

Audio

ambient stadium noise

Build

The creator introduces the context of the video to the audience.

00:01 - 00:101 SHOT

200:01

medium close-upeye-levelhandheld

Introduce the premise

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Man talking directly to camera, explaining they are at the game early.

Audio

dialogue clear

Reveal

Introduces the secondary character and the stadium view.

00:10 - 00:312 SHOTS

300:10

medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Introduce secondary character

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Wife waves at the camera.

Audio

dialogue continues

hard-cut

400:14

wide shoteye-levelpan

Show the environment

Camera

pan right to left

Action

Camera pans across the stadium field.

Audio

ambient noise

Solution

The interview segment provides the 'why' behind the video.

00:31 - 00:561 SHOT

500:31

medium close-upeye-levelhandheld

Content delivery

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Wife talking to the camera about the new jersey.

Audio

dialogue clear

Proof

Visual confirmation of the specific jersey mentioned.

00:56 - 01:001 SHOT

600:56

medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Visual reveal

Camera

handheld subtle drift

Action

Camera focuses on the back of the wife's jersey.

Audio

dialogue continues

CTA

Closing the vlog by showing the atmosphere and encouraging the viewer.

01:00 - 01:341 SHOT

701:00

medium shoteye-levelhandheld

Outro

Camera

tracking forward

Action

Walking through the concourse, showing the crowd and atmosphere.

Audio

ambient noise

Script

Full screenplay with dialogue and action

235 words

2 speakers

7 shots

6 beats

Screenplay

5 PAGES

Screenplay

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Page

1 / 5

by jimmcandrewheadshots

Speakers: Host, Wife

INT./EXT. — HOOK

Establishes the location and the 'early bird' premise.

View of the empty baseball stadium field from the concourse.

INT./EXT. — BUILD

The creator introduces the context of the video to the audience.

Man talking directly to camera, explaining they are at the game early.

[medium close-up, handheld]

[00:01]

HOST

Okay, I'm live. It is our first Phillies game of the year.

[00:03]

It's our first one.

[00:05]

And as always, we got here very early so we can walk around.

[00:09]

So my lovely wife...

INT./EXT. — REVEAL

Introduces the secondary character and the stadium view.

Wife waves at the camera.

[medium shot, handheld]

[00:10]

HOST

Here she is.

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2 / 5

[00:11]

HOST

What do we have to do?

[00:12]

WIFE

We have to walk around.

[00:13]

HOST

And we have to keep, we have to always walk in.

Camera pans across the stadium field.

[wide shot, pan]

[00:15]

HOST

(V.O.)

Almost everyone can stand here and look at the field from here.

[00:19]

(V.O.)

Oh, look at that. Some sort of practice.

[00:22]

(V.O.)

Look at that now. Look at this.

[00:23]

(V.O.)

Awesome.

[00:24]

(V.O.)

There you go. That's excellent.

[00:28]

(V.O.)

Very cool.

[00:30]

(V.O.)

So I think...

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Page

3 / 5

INT./EXT. — SOLUTION

The interview segment provides the 'why' behind the video.

Wife talking to the camera about the new jersey.

[medium close-up, handheld]

[00:31]

HOST

So, what's going to happen tonight?

[00:33]

WIFE

Why is tonight special?

[00:35]

Oh, because of the new pitcher.

[00:37]

HOST

What's his name?

[00:38]

WIFE

Painter.

[00:41]

HOST

Painter.

[00:42]

WIFE

And, uh, Painter.

[00:45]

HOST

Painter.

[00:47]

Painter. There we go.

[00:48]

And is he going to win tonight?

[00:50]

WIFE

Of course.

[00:51]

HOST

Yes, of course.

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Page

4 / 5

[00:52]

HOST

And she's sporting her new...

[00:53]

...Phanatic jersey that she...

INT./EXT. — PROOF

Visual confirmation of the specific jersey mentioned.

Camera focuses on the back of the wife's jersey.

[medium shot, handheld]

[00:56]

HOST

The Phanatic jersey that she...

INT./EXT. — CTA

Closing the vlog by showing the atmosphere and encouraging the viewer.

Walking through the concourse, showing the crowd and atmosphere.

[medium shot, handheld]

[01:00]

HOST

(V.O.)

All right, we're back.

[01:01]

(V.O.)

It is through the concourse.

[01:04]

(V.O.)

We're walking all the way around, get some steps in.

[01:06]

(V.O.)

We got a good hour and 30 minutes before the game starts.

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5 / 5

[01:08]

HOST

(V.O.)

So you got to get here early, experience the whole thing.

[01:12]

(V.O.)

Maybe have a cheesesteak.

[01:14]

(V.O.)

Or a burger or something.

[01:16]

(V.O.)

Maybe it's buy one get one free dog night.

[01:18]

(V.O.)

So we won't be doing that.

[01:20]

(V.O.)

But anyway, there you go.

[01:23]

(V.O.)

First game of the year, go Phillies.

[01:25]

Go Phillies.

— THE END —

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Transcript

Dialogue

235 words

2 speakers

42 segments

HostWife

Host

Okay, I'm live. It is our first Phillies game of the year.

Host

It's our first one.

Host

And as always, we got here very early so we can walk around.

Host

So my lovely wife...

Host

Here she is.

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Jim McAndrew | Headshot Photographer

@jimmcandrewheadshots on instagram • 1.0K followers

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